Seth,
Did you perhaps look at the wrong paragraph 2? Your response references
your comments @ the PMC (message 5911); his references your English
nits thread (message 5910)
Dad
On May 8, 2007, at 7:52 AM, Seth Dillingham wrote:
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> On 5/8/07, Sean McMains said:
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>> Or could it be the terrific run-on sentence in paragraph 2? Or the
>> use of a
>> plural verb with a collective noun in paragraph 4? Oh, Wikipedia
>> tells me
>> that
>> the latter is actually legit. Guess I'm going with the run-on, then.
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> "I'm doing it again this year," is definitely not a run-on sentence.
> There is no other sentence in paragraph two.
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> John VanDyk got it right. Now I need to find him a gold star.
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> Wise guy.
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> Seth
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